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This is the second of my college character musings. Here it is in its unedited glory!

(Note: I didn't get to watch the entire film. When Mom saw Dr. whatshisname talking to his "friends on the other side" about selling the souls of New Orleans, she deemed it too much bad voodoo for our household, and was immediately stopped. I've read stuff in Wikipedia and seen clips on Youtube. So if i say something not quite right about the film, let me know, k?)

 

"Just one kiss?"

She said she'd never kiss a frog. However, with her dreams in peril, and this "prince" in need of growing up hits her with an offer she cannot refuse: a kiss in exchange for her dream to come true. Not wanting to let her dream fall to pieces after coming so far, she kisses the frog. And confirms my childhood hypothesis:

If you go kissing frogs, you gonna turn into one.

A kiss is something special. We grow up wanting Mommy to kiss our boo-boos to make them all better(though i grew up with a Boo Boo that will not go away if Mommy kisses him, but that's another blog). We sighed over a prince and princess kiss and live happily ever after. We giggled when we caught Mommy kissing Daddy under the mistletoe. We grew up learning that a kiss is something very special. A kiss is absolute magic!

A kiss(especially THE first kiss) is meant to join two into one. It's meant to bring about a happily ever after that God created for two to share. However, today's kisses are being sold to the highest bidder. If kissing this boy will make you popular, then a girl's got to do what a girl's got to do. If a kiss means he'll always love me, then give it to him.

We got too many frogs out there today trying to become a prince by a girl's kiss. But that's not how it's supposed to be. Kissing a princess can break the "spell", but it's not something to be bought and sold. It's not to be taken lightly. The "first" kiss on Tiana's wedding day brought about the desired results for both her and the "frog". That's a kiss bringing about happily ever after.

"When you became my wife, that made you-"

"A princess. You just kissed yourself a princess."

"And I'm about to do it again."

A kiss. A priceless treasure meant to make two become one. And lead to many more kisses to come.

  • Mood: Hungry
  • Watching: Big Brother USA


Do you know that...


 Bullet; Blue ...that kid you just shoved down the stairs?
He's abused enough at home.

 Bullet; Blue ...that girl you called fat?
She's starving herself.

 Bullet; Blue ...that bald woman?
She's dying of cancer.

 Bullet; Blue ...that kid you laughed at for crying?
He's crying because his best friend was killed.

 Bullet; Blue ...that "emo" kid you made fun of?
He's going through much more than you.

 Bullet; Blue ...that kid you terrorize and beat up everyday?
He wants to kill himself. 

 Bullet; Blue ...that man you made fun of for some ugly scars?
He fought for your freedom.


1. Repost if you're against bullying 

2. Ignore if you are with bullying
  • Mood: Christmas Spirited
  • Watching: Big Brother USA
Once upon a time in a faraway land, lived a princess in a shining castle. Gentle and kind, she was loved by all. Yet this princess hid a dark secret. Living inside her was a monster. Black as night and cold as a blizzard, this beast raged within the princess. Its touch was death, and its cry brought despair on all who heard it. She did not remember exactly when it came or where it came from. All the poor girl knew was that it existed, and it was a horrible thing.
The princess didn't want anyone to be harmed by the monster so she kept it sealed within herself. She felt it her duty to protect her people. For years, she lived hearing it screaching in her soul as its talons sank deeper into her heart. Slowly, her smile turned into a mask to hide the destruction within. She didn't want anyone to know this beast existed. How would they react? Would they lose faith in her? Would her title be taken from her? Who could carry the weight of the kingdom if she could not? No, she couldn't risk exposing the truth within. So, she carried it alone. Every time she looked in the mirror, all she could see was a horrible monster. Whenever someone question if she was alright, she would politely reply that she was merely tired. She cried herself to sleep as the monster snarled and screamed, fearing what would happen if this thing inside her escaped.
One day, it did. Her barriers failed her as the thing seeped through her bones, coating her body and mind in its toxins. She tried to contain it, but it was too late. She had no strength left. The strong warrior was reduced to a sniffling child as the beast carried out a terrible curse. People watched in shock as their ruler lay there, curled up tight as tears streamed down her face. The smile was gone. The mask was shattered as the ugly truth was laid bare for all to see. The girl hid in her castle, ruling from afar. She feared herself and what others thought of her. She didn't have to look in the mirror to see the monster. The monster had consumed her. It took her strength and peace of mind with it, leaving a shell of a person in its place. No one knew how to reverse the effects. Wizards and magicians from far and wide tried charm and potion to disenchant, but to no avail. She remained tainted by the horrible monster. She cried, feeling more alone than ever. It had escaped, effected everyone that she was trying to protect as well as making her a monster in the process. She curled up in her throne as she buried her face in her hands. Tears of anguish and fear streamed down her face. What would happen now? What would become of her? What would become of the kingdom? Could she ever be herself again? What did everyone truly think of her? Was she just meant to be alone? Who could ever learn to love this beast?
Beauty and the Beast
Tears of anguish fell to create this. i don't know what to make of it except, this is me. Right now.
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Something that I like to do is dissect a character to see how well written they are. I found a few of these that I posted in college and thought I could share them here. I want to do more on DA, and who knows, this might be the thing to do. If you like, please let me know and maybe post some ideas of other characters I could do. Thanks!

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Ariel is the Drama Queen. The one who wants her world her way. She sees things differently from others. However, family doesn't understand how she can like the things she does because the things that intrigue her go against what her family see them to be. The world above is nothing but danger while the world below is safer(it's not perfect. You got that sea witch watching your every move, you know?) Ariel's family rather not go against what makes their world safe. It has it's own excitement, but Ariel can take only so much of musical numbers every 10 minutes! She wants her world to change, but she doesn't know how. She loves a boy from the forbidden world, but her father won't let her follow her heart. So, she finds another way. The evil one lets her live her dream in exchange for her voice. Everything goes well in the end, but what if she hadn't tried to go her own way. What if she respected her father? he did grant her wish in the end, but alot of trouble came to both worlds. Even if the evil one was destroyed in the end, what else could have been if she had waited and obeyed her father?

 

I see Ariel as the inner girl of many today. Sweet 16 and ready to marry their prince charming. However, the world isn't all roses and smiles. Going our own way might end in happily ever after, but at what cost to ourselves? We're still naive about love at such a young age. It may be sweet for a time, but we don't' all end up like Ariel.

 

God says for us to wait for his perfect timing. In Song of Solomon, over and over "not to awaken love until the time is right." Television today shows girls in Middle School finding their perfect boy and having their happily ever after now. It isn't like that. True Love last beyond school day crushes. It takes time to create, time to test, and time to enjoy. God will let it happen when the time is right. And His timing, His prince made just for you, and His True Love for two to share will be absolutely perfect.

 

  • Mood: Miserable
  • Listening to: Fight Song
My grandfather passed away about 2 weeks ago. Been in and out of depressed spells about it. I apologize for disappearing. I just couldn't be around people or talk to them online. I might still disappear for spells of time. It just really sucks.
  • Mood: Depressed
  • Listening to: Pandora
  • Playing: Frozen Free Fall
This is the second of my college character musings. Here it is in its unedited glory!

(Note: I didn't get to watch the entire film. When Mom saw Dr. whatshisname talking to his "friends on the other side" about selling the souls of New Orleans, she deemed it too much bad voodoo for our household, and was immediately stopped. I've read stuff in Wikipedia and seen clips on Youtube. So if i say something not quite right about the film, let me know, k?)

 

"Just one kiss?"

She said she'd never kiss a frog. However, with her dreams in peril, and this "prince" in need of growing up hits her with an offer she cannot refuse: a kiss in exchange for her dream to come true. Not wanting to let her dream fall to pieces after coming so far, she kisses the frog. And confirms my childhood hypothesis:

If you go kissing frogs, you gonna turn into one.

A kiss is something special. We grow up wanting Mommy to kiss our boo-boos to make them all better(though i grew up with a Boo Boo that will not go away if Mommy kisses him, but that's another blog). We sighed over a prince and princess kiss and live happily ever after. We giggled when we caught Mommy kissing Daddy under the mistletoe. We grew up learning that a kiss is something very special. A kiss is absolute magic!

A kiss(especially THE first kiss) is meant to join two into one. It's meant to bring about a happily ever after that God created for two to share. However, today's kisses are being sold to the highest bidder. If kissing this boy will make you popular, then a girl's got to do what a girl's got to do. If a kiss means he'll always love me, then give it to him.

We got too many frogs out there today trying to become a prince by a girl's kiss. But that's not how it's supposed to be. Kissing a princess can break the "spell", but it's not something to be bought and sold. It's not to be taken lightly. The "first" kiss on Tiana's wedding day brought about the desired results for both her and the "frog". That's a kiss bringing about happily ever after.

"When you became my wife, that made you-"

"A princess. You just kissed yourself a princess."

"And I'm about to do it again."

A kiss. A priceless treasure meant to make two become one. And lead to many more kisses to come.

  • Mood: Hungry
  • Watching: Big Brother USA

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Karen Shivoski
I'm one of the fallen. A vessel for damnation. The world just wants me for a punching bag. They forget that I can't be killed. I'm set aflame by hellfire. I will always rise from the ashes. One day, they'll regret what they did to me.
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Yeah, that's Raven talking up there. Anywho, I'm Karen. I'm one of those weird people who likes to get in character when they write. Otherwise I'm just gonna stare blankly at my computer screen till I pass out. My bff in rl is Nitsuj-Poy. My bro is ThetaSigma7. They both are more into pictures I'll probably post some random poems or story chapters. If there is anything you like, hate, want to see, please comment so I can give it a go!
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slickcoolbuizle Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
hi i heard from someone you rp
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015
who would that someone be?
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slickcoolbuizle Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Dannystar64 thats who we were gonna do a Swan Princess rp from the film but he needs days to get ready so in the mean time i'm guessing i'll have to find someone who knows the 3 films and would rp it
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
Danny is awesome. Yeah, I know all three films and would love to rp them.
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C-S-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Photographer
keep working hard :) hope you are doing well! 
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
Thanks! i'm good. time to rest from teaching. Hope you are awesome.
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C-S-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Photographer
im doing alright. kinda frustrated. got rejected by a car dealership today and couldnt buy a new truck. and i sent a scene out from my story for people to edit and they did not edit what i had requested
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
That really sucks. :(
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Dannystar64 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015
hi, remember our RPs?
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
yeah, but i've been working late all this freaking week. Sorry. I will get to you.
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